From: Jonathan Hunt <jhunt24>
Date: Fri, 27 Feb 2004 01:12:12 +0000

I enjoyed A NORTHERN LIGHT for many of the reasons that have already been stated, but I have a question about the then/now narrative structure: what did it add to the book?

For me, I resented the now sections when they appeared, preferring instead to stay with Mattie on the farm, and I've talked with a great many readers who have felt likewise. In addition, the now sections set up expectations which they never fulfilled. There were promises of mystery, danger, suspense, and secrets--and not a single one fulfilled to the degree to warrant the narrative structure. The conclusion of the book, then, was very anti-climactic for me, like all the air fizzing out of the balloon. What could have been--and what should have been--a very powerful ending was diluted and spread out over the course of the book. I wish the author had told the story chronologically, and I can see no reason that she shouldn't have. I think it would have made a good book even better.

Waiting to be enlightened,

Jonathan

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